Okay, just finised the new one. From you guys' comments and suggestions. I decided to make a new one. Here it is, if there're any suggestions. Please says it and help me out! It's dued tomorrow, guys! Thank you very much for your all help!
You picked a very challenging angle view that is interesting, good job. For me, some details are kind of confusing like brown objects on the left part of image... actually, I'm not sure what all brown parts really are. Brown color represents storm or rock? I think you should add more variety of color to the wave(ocean) in order to seperate depth of the image and pick different color to indecate the boat as well. Wave still looks stiff, maybe because of using too thin brush for rendering. Anyway, I hope you finish it very soon. Waiting to see it done :) keep going Nick.
Hi May! Thank you very much for your suggestion. I ask Young and Kelvin and they also give a lot of good comments. Combine all of your guys comments. I think I will have a wonderful piece later. I'll update the new one after I finished here. Once again, thank you for your all supports!
Thanks to your suggestion! Kalvin I really appreciate you guys' comments and suggestion. I'm happy with it, too. I think I like the sargent brush now hehehh!. I'll use it more in the future.
Very NIce Piece! I remember seeing it in our class. I was just wondering if this is Christ's hand I just see the symbolism with the hole in the wrist and the anchor through the rough storm. I could be looking into to it too much but thats what I see. Great work
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You picked a very challenging angle view that is interesting, good job. For me, some details are kind of confusing like brown objects on the left part of image... actually, I'm not sure what all brown parts really are. Brown color represents storm or rock? I think you should add more variety of color to the wave(ocean) in order to seperate depth of the image and pick different color to indecate the boat as well. Wave still looks stiff, maybe because of using too thin brush for rendering. Anyway, I hope you finish it very soon. Waiting to see it done :) keep going Nick.
Hi May!
Thank you very much for your suggestion. I ask Young and Kelvin and they also give a lot of good comments. Combine all of your guys comments. I think I will have a wonderful piece later. I'll update the new one after I finished here. Once again, thank you for your all supports!
very nice nhut!
good changes made from the last time i saw it. i think the overall composition works better this time and the read is much more clear.
there's a lot more movement in the water and the whole illustration doesn't feel so dark. i can tell you put the sargent brush to good use =)
well done on the hand too. i think the skin tone is much more convincing this time around. can't wait to see it in class!
Thanks to your suggestion! Kalvin
I really appreciate you guys' comments and suggestion. I'm happy with it, too. I think I like the sargent brush now hehehh!. I'll use it more in the future.
this one is easier to the eyes than that last one hehehe
Very NIce Piece! I remember seeing it in our class. I was just wondering if this is Christ's hand I just see the symbolism with the hole in the wrist and the anchor through the rough storm. I could be looking into to it too much but thats what I see. Great work
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